Extra Storyboards.

After hearing the feedback from my teacher and target audience I have made some extra storyboards for some additional shots to be added into my second edit. I have also made a rough storyboard for the titles, showing the text I have chosen to use.

One of the points that came up to be improved was the use of props. These three extra shots include Daisy, with a stylish backpack containing some daily items that would be associated with a teenage girl, including, nail varnish, perfume, a phone, headphones and also a book ironically entitled 'Girl, Missing'. 

               

Secondly, more close-ups were needed so once again, I have draw some shots of Daisy in close-up but also of the abductor. 

      

Finally I have drawn some shots that include the abductor more, to make sure that it is clear what and who Daisy is running from. 

Initial Storyboards

Before doing any shooting and after deciding on the plot of my opening sequence, I have made some rough storyboards of the shots I will need to film, for my first edit. After editing the whole thing, I will show it to my teacher and target audience for feedback where I may have to add in or take away some shots. I will then do single drawings of the extra shots to add in.

Below are all the storyboards for my first edit of my main task.

Preliminary Storyboards.

For my preliminary task I have decided to shoot at my sister's university flat. The plot is a simple conversation between two people over an unknown topic. The storyboards below show the process of walking through the door and the required 180° shot.